I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Good evening this my emotion cloud leave a comment after you read.Whaea I'm so sorry I can't change the words I'll change it tomorrow when we are in class
You have been really creative with your word cloud by including a coloured background and a range of colours to make the text stand out. The vocabulary you have used tells me that you had lots of different feelings during lockdown - as we all did. It was quite challenging at times! On the future I suggest that you double check your spelling e.g. crazy, bored. Keep up the great work EJ!
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ReplyDeleteYou have been really creative with your word cloud by including a coloured background and a range of colours to make the text stand out. The vocabulary you have used tells me that you had lots of different feelings during lockdown - as we all did. It was quite challenging at times! On the future I suggest that you double check your spelling e.g. crazy, bored. Keep up the great work EJ!
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