I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kiora everyone its EJ Coffin so just cut to the chase.Today Im doing a blog about my learning from home site.it was so good and beautifull.I got all my done.So here is my setting and my carecters.After you read leave a comment.
I am very pleased to see that you have posted some of your writing draft on your blog. You have written an good introduction to your blog pot, just need to double check that your sentences make sense otherwise it is a good introduction encouraging your reader to read and comment on your work. If you can rotate the photo that you have posted we will be able to read easily and give you some writing comments.
Talofa EJ
ReplyDeleteI am very pleased to see that you have posted some of your writing draft on your blog. You have written an good introduction to your blog pot, just need to double check that your sentences make sense otherwise it is a good introduction encouraging your reader to read and comment on your work. If you can rotate the photo that you have posted we will be able to read easily and give you some writing comments.
Keep it up EJ!
ok
Deletesorry i tryed my best to rotate the picture but i couldnt
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