Today I am writing a blog post about my learning. We have been working on health and maths but when it gets to the end of the term we do something called the learning. This is used to set your goals for next term and somethings we did this term. This is like a list of what you did. We are going to end this Hurumanu on Friday the 11 of Septemper
Here some of my learning down below see you next blog.
i liked how you put them in really good sentence
ReplyDeleteHi Ej Good job on your Hurmanu 6 learning story.I like how you explained it and it is easy to read. Also you used capable letters and full stops.Maybe next time you can reread your writing so it makes scene.
ReplyDeleteGood job
David
Kia'Ora EJ!
ReplyDeleteI love your blog post.
The fact that you also included your Learning story into the blog post as well.
The learning story is very interesting because instead of putting a few words you put them in full sentences.
One thing you might want to do is change the writing you put "We did a learning." and then it was a full stop. You should put Story after learning to make it Learning Story.
Sincerely
Dylan :D
EJ you made it the same size of the blog. And that is good for you But to summarise it all of it is beautiful
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