Hello everyone today we are writing our final bog for fairy tales passion. Our class was tasked with writing a blog post the will help people more understand our work for the end of the term. We were tasked with writing a story that is rewritten using an already written story that has a template. I was very happy with this class and all the work that we have done. Has especially the part that researched the Grimm brothers. This blog will include a copy of my story rewritten. Hope you enjoy my blog and leave a comment.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, December 9, 2021
Friday, December 3, 2021
Sience and sports
Hello everyone today we are writings a blog post about what we were looking at today. so we have been looking at how many calories we have had here are the pictures for proof.
I have worked out the calories we had today.
I had a chicken tender role 237 calories
But the total calories I am meant to have is 2372
Wednesday, December 1, 2021
The panda, The witch, and the wardrobe
A story that began
Eighty years ago there were four kids. These four kids lived in London. One day London was bombed by NAZI Germany during World War 2. So the kids' parents decided to move their children to the countryside to prevent them from getting hurt during the air raids. They were moved to a professor's house in the countryside.
Three weeks later
Skip forward to three weeks later the kids decide to play a game of Marco, Polo. So Suzy decides to not play and goes and explores. She walked by a room that had a Wardrobe. She decides to go and hide in the wardrobe but what she did not know. Is that the wardrobe was a portal to another dimension. When she entered she was immediately transported to the land of Narnia she was fascinated to see the beautiful dimension.
But there was a problem it was very hot. She didn't have anything to keep her cool. But then she noticed a man that was standing behind the light ball but the odd fact is that is the only light ball there is in the land. She was very scared to anywhere near the man or the lamb. But she sucked it up and walked over to the man the man said, Is it you oh great Suzy I bow down to you your Majesty. She was confused but ignored it. Then the man took her to his house but the panda showed to her my dream. The sheepman as scared by this that he took the girl and brought her back to the light bole and told her to go home.
Suzy goes back to her house. and starts to apologize to her brothers and sister. Then they shouted at her to be quiet and that Edmond might find them then they said ahahahahahahahahaha. They all got found but then Suzy started telling them about the Rommel of Narnia. But her spilings didn't believe her and they never went back there again. Wrong three weeks later her brother Edmond went back and he became the king of Narnia. Has for Suzy she went back and she defeated the fire queen but making takes a shower. She became queen of the fire realm. They all leave happily ever after.
THE END
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